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Old 11-01-2008, 12:32 PM   #1
Jeff Fuchs Jeff Fuchs is offline
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Kylie




This is my final drawing of Kylie. She's been modeling at my house for several months now, and she has been planning to move to L.A. all along. This weekend she's finally doing it. She's leaving because she's young and wants to see more than Louisiana before she settles down. I gave her great encouragement, because she'll never have a better opportunity than this.

This drawing took a couple of hours. She's actually prettier than this, but I'm not a very good artist, and she doesn't stay still (drawing sessions are a regular part of our social lives, and we tend to talk the whole time).

Hopefully, when she comes home for visits she'll stop by and model for me again. I'm going to miss her. She's a good model, and local!

11x17 charcoal on Strathmore paper

EDIT: For some reason, when posted, the image enlarged, and pixellated (at least, on my monitor). Here's a link to the image on another server... http://i36.tinypic.com/29wqz29.jpg
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Old 11-01-2008, 03:19 PM   #2
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Very nice drawing, Jeff!
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Old 11-01-2008, 09:29 PM   #3
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Thanks, Julie

Here's a pic of Kylie. I don't think this violates the rules of this forum, since it's not a nude photo reference (correct me if I'm wrong).

She sometimes straightens her hair, as in this photo, but she had her natural curls when I drew her.
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Old 11-01-2008, 10:08 PM   #4
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You've got that jaw angle just right, I think.
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Old 11-01-2008, 10:29 PM   #5
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Quote:
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She's actually prettier than this, but I'm not a very good artist..
I don't agree with that!

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... and she doesn't stay still (drawing sessions are a regular part of our social lives, and we tend to talk the whole time).
When I'm doing a portrait I usually talk a lot with my models too. What I try to do is to make sure that they get back to the right position all the time.

Keep on doing this good job.
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Old 11-01-2008, 10:37 PM   #6
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Hi Jeff, everything looks wonderful here. A slight curve at the base of the nose, would have made signature likeness to the model.
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Old 11-01-2008, 11:18 PM   #7
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Agreed, Marcus.
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Old 12-12-2008, 08:36 AM   #8
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Nince person your subject. even though she has a lovely nose I believe it could be a tad smaller in your drawing.
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Old 03-03-2009, 08:02 AM   #9
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Jeff, this is beautiful drawing! Reminds me of old master studies.
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