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Old 08-12-2008, 10:42 AM   #7
Amanda Grosjean Amanda Grosjean is offline
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Hi Steven,

That was a beautifully worded explanation, thank you.

I was already working on some adjustments through Photoshop when you posted so I will send this version along. Forgive the crudeness of the fix-ups, you get the idea. I extended the area to the right and shortened it slightly to the left, behind the mother. I diluted the vase and flowers, moved the flowers, moved the lamp, lowered the top, and changed the color of the background. I will take your other comments into consideration and play with it a bit more. Let me know what you think of these alterations.

-Amanda
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