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Old 04-04-2003, 11:17 AM   #1
Mai Ly Mai Ly is offline
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'My Angel' composition




Hello everyone,

I would like to ask everyone's opinion about a composition of my current painting. I have underpainted it with white + raw umber, and was going to put colours on it, until someone I know said that the girl looks like an angel, hence the title 'My Angel'! However, ever since then, I keep seeing the two 'wings' (cushions) stick out from her sides, and not sure if it a good composition, looking like that. What does everyone think? How is the composition as a whole?

Any suggestions to improve this composition will be much appreciated!

Sincerely,

Mai


Here is the painting in full. It is oils on linen, size 22" x 18".
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