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Old 09-14-2002, 10:08 PM   #1
Rebecca Willoughby Rebecca Willoughby is offline
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Reclining children




This is a 14" x 22" colored pencil drawing on toned Canson paper. I am giving it to my mother-in-law for her birthday. The girls were lying on a white sheet on a hardwood floor. There was a brick ledge behind them at an angle, that is in front of the fireplace. My sister-in-law told me to leave it alone. She says it looks great. I have a triple mat cut that is taupe, charcoal, and oyster white with a pewter frame. I guess I should set it down for a couple of days. Any suggestions?

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Old 09-14-2002, 10:11 PM   #2
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Close up of face.
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Old 09-14-2002, 10:14 PM   #3
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Close up of face 2.

The pencil strokes are smoother on the original. Scanning the image and the low res size to post it really makes it look choppy.
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Old 09-15-2002, 04:56 PM   #4
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So nice!

I have really enjoyed looking at all of your colored pencil pieces, and this one is really beautiful! I love your style. It is so soft and so gentle, and perfect for the subjects you chose. I especially like the treatment of the curly hair, and their eyes are so big and innocent; just great!

I think a bit of a background could actually be very nice and really help to pop those girls out, as long as it is not very detailed. Maybe just impressions of the background objects in a varied shape sort of tonal manner. Hope that makes some sort of sense.

p. s. I really love your piece with the girls at the pond/lake with the ducks! It is so GREAT!
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Old 09-15-2002, 10:24 PM   #5
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Thanks, Carolyn!

I have started to lay in some background. I love working with toned papers and colored pencils. The little girls in this piece and in the other pieces are mine. I don't know if you are familiar with her work, but you should look up Ann Kullberg's web site. She is listed on this Forum. She does wonderful colored pencil work. She also has an emagazine. I think you would enjoy it!

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Old 09-16-2002, 08:58 PM   #6
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Rebecca,

Very tender piece, I'm sure your mother-in-law will love it. You said you were laying in some background. I'd like to see more mass underneath them too, more definition to the sheet. You really can't tell it is a sheet right now. I know you haven't finished it yet. Post it when you update it. My colored pencils should be in in a few days, you've inspired me to try it.
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Old 09-17-2002, 02:44 AM   #7
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Your girls are beautiful!

What great subjects you have to work from! I saw the picture of you with your daughter in the introduction area (I think?) And that is a wonderful picture! I really hope you use it, and do a piece from it. Your daughter looks just like a girl from a Bouguereau painting.

I have seen Ann Kullberg's site. She is really great!
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Old 09-19-2002, 06:28 PM   #8
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Carolyn,

Thank you ! I think my children are beautiful, but I am partial! They are really troopers when it comes to their mommy snapping pictures of them all of the time. Their father, on the other hand, complains about the rolls and rolls of film that have to be developed. He will appreciate it one day though! Don't forget to post the finished piece that I saw in your introduction. I look forward to it!

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Old 09-19-2002, 07:38 PM   #9
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Piece from introduction section

I posted that piece in the Other mediums section,http://forum.portraitartist.com/show...&threadid=1336 because the scarf and cuff are collaged. It would be great if you would take a look and give me your opinions! I will be taking slides of the finished piece either tomorrow or Saturday, so any feedback would be great! (If you get the chance of course.)
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Old 09-19-2002, 11:23 PM   #10
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Rebecca - you might be ready to try a digital camera. Your accountant could show you how to best expense it....
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