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Old 01-28-2010, 05:31 PM   #1
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Patty, this is absolutely gorgeous. I love it!!!
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Old 01-28-2010, 10:55 PM   #2
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What a privilege and a challenge to paint such a beautiful little girl!

I notice how soft and glowing the light is on the left side of her face. I would seek to bring out that light and keep the edges soft to capture the glow. The light on the hair is important too.
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Old 01-29-2010, 11:27 AM   #3
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Thanks, Carol, I needed the boost!!
Thanks you Mary, I will work on the glow, believing it will come in the later stages. Right now I tell myself none of the magic is painted in yet, that it will come in the last stages i.e. highlights, etc. I have yet to really paint the hair. I can't wait till it dries so I can work on it some more!
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Old 01-29-2010, 07:22 PM   #4
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Hi Patty,

Nice start: can't wait to see it complete!
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Old 01-29-2010, 07:32 PM   #5
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Very nice start Patty.. one small thing that my also add to the painting is if you add a little touch of cad orange to the inside of her right nostril it will give the impression of light showing through transparent skin.. its just a small thing but I find it really adds to the impact. I also add a little al crimson and ultra marine blue to the depths of the nostrils.

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Old 01-30-2010, 11:30 AM   #6
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Thanks, Julie and Bruce. I can't wait till it dries so I can go back into it!
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