12-20-2008, 06:32 PM
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Hi Flladi,
I like the composition very much and also the colors.
I think that you should lower the value of the eyelid to the right (her left eye), it seems to come forward in stead of , gradually, be turning into the shadow area.
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12-21-2008, 07:25 PM
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Dear Filadi,
Lovely portrait, lovely subject! I think you've received some excellent feedback, and I don't know if I can add anything at all. Other than a little fill light to lighten the shadow's value on the face on our right side, I think the painting is really terrific.
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