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Old 07-04-2007, 12:51 PM   #1
Dan Landrie Dan Landrie is offline
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Steven gives a thorough critique, the only thing I would add is that I would have put the composition lower on the page, leaving more room at the top and bringing everything of interest more toward the center horizontally. It's a beautiful drawing thanks for posting it, along with Steve"s critique I've learned allot from this one.
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