Brielle

[Lisa Gloria]

I love the brushy qualities of this painting, and the way you depicted the light across the skin and hair. It appears as though the drawing may be off somewhat around the ears, placement of the eyes and mouth. And the very dark values and sharp edges at the eyes are a little startling.

Doing this from life sounds fun. I only ever get a gesture drawing in before my kids wander off. Good exercize in patience!

[John Bruso]

I love these critiques!

The three of you have convinced me to go back and re-work the painting. I agree with the "cone" imagery as well as the color harmony comment. The darker values present only in the baby's eyes are startling, as well! The three of you have nailed all the things about this painting that were bothering me. Usually, my paintings have too many edges and too much detail. This time around, it was the opposite!

I plan to post an updated version as soon as possible. Please check my progress. Also, I would love to hear further critiques from anyone who has more to say

Thank you so much.