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Old 05-13-2007, 11:14 AM   #2
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Hi Christy,
I like the composition, the color of the dress is so delicate and works fine because of the bluish shades in the red.

However, I think that you should do something more with the brim of the water. It looks much the same from foreground to the far back. This diagonal is the most prominent perspective indication in the picture, so I think that you should indicate distance by all means! Make it more off focus behind her and more bluish and less contrasty as it recedes out in the back.

I like the color changes in the shallow water at the left.
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