How about it?

[Mike McCarty]

Wow, what a photo. I'm not sure I agree with the landscape (?) background. Seems like that might get a little complex for all that you have to deal with. I kinda like what you have right here. It appears that the person is sitting? If I'm right, then the background I see would suggest that they are indoors and I don't need anymore explanation re: what the person is sitting on. If you put them out of doors I might start to wonder. Sounds like you are going to paint color? Also, I like the slightly abstract nature of whatever that is on the left. I bet you can do this well.