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Old 01-17-2006, 03:29 PM   #1
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Hi April,
That's a beautiful grisaille.
I'd suggest you to review the right side of her face. The eye is not so wide open and not so big, the right side is not so round.
You made a correction on her chin, if you hadn't made that, her face would look longer as in the refference.
First of all, correct the eye dimensions, then you'll see clearly the other necessary chages, but that's a very close likeness. Check the shadows above her lips too.
Try to soft the edges on right cheek and to scumble her neck too.
But that's beautiful anyway.
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