Judson, you confuse me. You already posted this, and received some really good advice on how to improve it, which, when comparing the two posts, you haven't heeded in the slightest.
http://forum.portraitartist.com/showthread.php?t=5810
What is it that you're looking for? It can't recall that you've ever reposted anything, employing any of the suggestions for improvement that you've received. Am I wrong?