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Old 02-22-2005, 11:15 AM   #1
Jimmie Arroyo Jimmie Arroyo is offline
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Hey Pat, this is coming out fantastic. Just goes to show what a good teacher and effort can do. Much better than the c**p I was doing at my weekly class. I'd like to see where you go from here. Hang in there!
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Old 02-23-2005, 10:05 PM   #2
Debra Norton Debra Norton is offline
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Patricia, what jumps out at me is the (our) left eye. I think it's that I see more white on far edge (the edge curving away from us) than on your lay-in. Plus the lower lid shape is angled up straighter than the lay-in. Obviously I'm only comparing it to the lay-in, so what I just said may mean absolutely nothing when you look at the reference photo. It's looking good, I'd like to see the rest as you go.
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