Moriah

[Patricia Joyce]

Wow, the color looks grayer here on the screen, than in person. I am holding back a bit with chroma until I feel she is more developed, if that makes any sense... this is the image of the first wash-in. I do have a reference photo which Marvin gave me to take home, but don't have it here to scan for you to see.

[Jimmie Arroyo]

Hey Pat, this is coming out fantastic. Just goes to show what a good teacher and effort can do. Much better than the c**p I was doing at my weekly class. I'd like to see where you go from here. Hang in there!

[Debra Norton]

Patricia, what jumps out at me is the (our) left eye. I think it's that I see more white on far edge (the edge curving away from us) than on your lay-in. Plus the lower lid shape is angled up straighter than the lay-in. Obviously I'm only comparing it to the lay-in, so what I just said may mean absolutely nothing when you look at the reference photo. It's looking good, I'd like to see the rest as you go.