Portrait Artist Forum    

Go Back   Portrait Artist Forum > Figurative Critiques - All Mediums
FAQ Community Calendar Today's Posts Search


Reply
 
Topic Tools Search this Topic Display Modes
Old 10-15-2004, 01:01 PM   #1
Kimberly Dow Kimberly Dow is offline
Juried Member
FT Professional
 
Kimberly Dow's Avatar
 
Joined: Jul 2003
Location: Corpus Christi, TX
Posts: 1,713



The apples and oranges and much more vivid than shown here, but the intensity of the wrap on her head is right on on my screen. Weird. Also - there is a bit more room on each side of the painting that I had to crop because it wasnt exactly straight.
__________________
Kim
http://kimberlydow.com

"Speak your mind, even if your voice shakes." - Maggie Kuhn

"If you obey all the rules, you'll miss all the fun." - Katherine Hepburn
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-15-2004, 02:14 PM   #2
Julie Deane Julie Deane is offline
Juried Member
 
Julie Deane's Avatar
 
Joined: Sep 2003
Location: Gainesville, GA
Posts: 1,298
Nice!

Kim,

This has turned out lovely. I would be happy with it as is.

Do we get to guess what the "bad" part is? Does the winner get a prize?

About the only think I see that could bother me might be that shoulder on our right (her left) that has become a dark isolated shape because the drapery has cut it off from the rest of the body.
__________________
Julie Deane
www.discerningeyeportraits.com
Member of Merit, Portrait Society of Atlanta
  Reply With Quote
Reply


Currently Active Users Viewing this Topic: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump

Similar Topics
Thread Topic Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Creating your own Prints - an alternative Michael Georges Business, Marketing & PR 8 05-09-2002 04:04 PM
Formal Thank You Notes Renee Brown Business, Marketing & PR 10 05-03-2002 03:13 PM

 

Make a Donation



Support the Forum by making a donation or ordering on Amazon through our search or book links..







All times are GMT -4. The time now is 01:16 PM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.6
Copyright ©2000 - 2025, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.