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06-30-2004, 04:05 PM
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This is an image before I retouched.
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06-30-2004, 05:02 PM
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Though this is not the works in progress section, I would like to say something nice about this charming pose.
Being a frontal, triangular, almost frontal lit composition, I am impressed of the life that you have put into it.
But , of cause, this has to do with all the small variations in color, light and not least, shape of the figure.
Well done, so far.
Are you going to do something about the little pink shape down left?
Allan
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06-30-2004, 07:35 PM
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Beautiful painting SB. Is this the one that you were displeased with regarding the heavy red?
If the image above is not a reasonable representation of the original I can understand your concern, but, to view this without knowing your mind, I would say that this is a very successful portrait.
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06-30-2004, 07:54 PM
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Thank you, Mike M!
You'll see how Cynthia do justice on this work after receiving a print.
Your timely advice enable me to tell them about shooting slides. The answer is too costly to do that.
But they did try digital and adjustment on file, do not work. This is by Fuji film. Yes, this the one looks reddish. I'll post another one.
Thank you Allan:
The pink shape you mentioned is a sash, or it is a pillow.
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07-02-2004, 01:12 PM
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Hi SB,
I see now that it belongs to the dress, though it was not clear to me at first.
I think that you have made a harmonious portrait, and would like very much to see the finished picture.
Allan
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