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[Kimberly Dow]

This is lovely Mary! The only thing that bothers me is the pantleg closest to us, where the shadow is. My eye is drawn to that first - maybe just soften the edge?

[Lynn Der]

Mary - if this is your first attempt at a full portrait in pastel, you've done a great job. First, the composition and pose are very original - easier said than done, from my experience. The other thing I love is the limited palette you used - it gives a calm, soft feeling to the painting.

There really is nothing that bothers me, except maybe the shadow on the right (on the chair).

The mom should be very happy! Good work!

Lynn Der