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Old 03-19-2004, 01:23 AM   #1
Kimberly Dow Kimberly Dow is offline
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This is lovely Mary! The only thing that bothers me is the pantleg closest to us, where the shadow is. My eye is drawn to that first - maybe just soften the edge?
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Old 03-19-2004, 08:15 PM   #2
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Mary - if this is your first attempt at a full portrait in pastel, you've done a great job. First, the composition and pose are very original - easier said than done, from my experience. The other thing I love is the limited palette you used - it gives a calm, soft feeling to the painting.

There really is nothing that bothers me, except maybe the shadow on the right (on the chair).

The mom should be very happy! Good work!

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