Ruby

Hi Jimmie,

This is beautiful. I love the expression, and the texture you got on her lips is outstanding.

I think that Jeff is reacting to the straight line of the part which we might have expected to be more of an arc, following the curve of the head. I think the white of the far eye is a bit bright, which is preventing that plane of the face from rotating away.

I love the eyes. I have an affection for big eyes and heavy lids. The pose you selected really highlights her features. Love it.