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Joined: Dec 2001
Location: Tulsa, Oklahoma
Posts: 2,674
Jean,
Well, I think you have certainly put forth the effort on this young lady. I don't have so much trouble with your execution as I do the way the lady is positioned on the canvas. I made a stab at repositioning her, which to my sensibilities brings her more into focus.
But, I am a notorious crop-too-tight fellow so take it for what it's worth.
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