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Old 06-08-2003, 06:42 PM   #1
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I like the soft looseness in her hair and I like the range of temperatures in the skintones. Here are a few things you might want to change:

In the photo she has a slightly cross-eyed look which I would correct in the painting. Also the value transitions on the right side of the neck are too strong, as are the saturated rosy areas of her lower cheeks. I would tone those areas down more.
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