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Old 02-24-2003, 09:19 PM   #1
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Nicer color!

A small thing: the lipstick seems to be running well beyond where her lip would end, at the lower left corner of her mouth.

The biggest thing I see now is that the eyes (especially the one on our left) seem too wide open, giving her a deer-in-the-headlights kind of look. On a relaxed face the upper eyelid would cover more of the top part of the iris. We wouldn't be able to see the iris curve in as much at the top as we do now. (I know, I know, eyes are very hard to paint!)
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