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Old 11-27-2007, 05:58 PM   #23
Mischa Milosevic Mischa Milosevic is offline
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Jean, now you have it! Good job! Do bring some light to the hair on our left, her right and there is a light area between her jaw and the hair in light on our right that does not set well. Try to balance the shape of the jaw there to the other side. One more thing, there is a light line on the breast I think you would do good if you spread that value of light a bit further, that will give some dimension to the breast and maybe adding just a little more light to the other breast in light.

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