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Old 12-01-2009, 08:32 PM   #1
Mara Schasteen Mara Schasteen is offline
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Hello! I painted this 14" x 11" oil today for my daughter's upcoming third birthday. I spent about two hours on it, using a limited palette of Transparent Oxide Red, Alizaron, Ultramarine, Viridian and White. I love it so far. Originally, I had planned to paint two litte teacups in front of the figure and to her right (our left). Would this effectively balance the values, or cause a distraction?

Any additional thoughts or suggestions are greatly appreciated!

PS - I made some changes and re-posted the pictures since my first post.
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Old 12-02-2009, 11:45 AM   #2
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That's lovely!
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Old 12-02-2009, 08:11 PM   #3
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I love this! The teacups, if placed anywhere in the picture, should be just where you say, in my opinion, but it's lovely as is too.
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Old 12-02-2009, 11:58 PM   #4
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It is beautiful just how it is Mara! I'd skip the teacups. Really really nice work!
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Old 12-03-2009, 01:03 PM   #5
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Thank you for your thoughts! The horizontal line of shadow in the foreground was bugging me, so I altered it a bit to create more interest and motion there. I like it now. On to the next painting!
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Old 12-07-2009, 10:20 PM   #6
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Seriously? You did this in TWO HOURS? Very well done.
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Old 12-07-2009, 10:52 PM   #7
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well... I painted the figure and the first version of the background in two hours, then I changed the movement of the foreground a bit the next day, so I guess I should clarify with 2 hours plus a night's sleep and a morning's musings. Thank you, Natalie!
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Old 12-09-2009, 05:35 PM   #8
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I envy how fast you can work. This is a lovely painting and I am sure means so much to you. She is sweet!
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Old 12-17-2009, 12:41 AM   #9
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Thank you so much, Patricia!
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