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08-03-2003, 07:24 PM
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Carmen
16" x 20" Oil on Canvas.
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08-03-2003, 07:25 PM
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Close-up.
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08-04-2003, 01:15 AM
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Deladier,
Lovely, but the eye on our right seems to be coming forward a bit too much for the angle.
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08-04-2003, 10:40 AM
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I love your work, as always. I particularly like the skintones in this one, the way you've done the mouth and the subtle flaming look of the background on the right.
I would, however, suggest that you might want to greatly soften the curl on her cheek. It will still get a lot of attention because of where it is, but it seems too hard and sharp right now.
Gorgeous painting!
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