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Deladier Almeida

08-03-2003 07:24 PM

Carmen

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16" x 20" Oil on Canvas.

Deladier Almeida

08-03-2003 07:25 PM

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Close-up.

Kimberly Dow

08-04-2003 01:15 AM

Deladier,

Lovely, but the eye on our right seems to be coming forward a bit too much for the angle.

Michele Rushworth

08-04-2003 10:40 AM

I love your work, as always. I particularly like the skintones in this one, the way you've done the mouth and the subtle flaming look of the background on the right.

I would, however, suggest that you might want to greatly soften the curl on her cheek. It will still get a lot of attention because of where it is, but it seems too hard and sharp right now.

Gorgeous painting!

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