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Old 01-24-2004, 08:12 PM   #1
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I saw my neighbor's daughter coming home from dance class and asked to use her as my guinnea pig. Im trying to get several pastels done for my portfolio. Do you think any of these are workable? If so, feel free to change anything. Thanks.
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Im Personally drawn to

the first photo, but don't like all the busy background, and if I were to do a plainer background, how do I explain that rail?

I like the two face shots as well, I may do a full body one as well as a head and shoulders.

I have over a hundred pictures from this afternoon, but they are all basically these five poses with minor differences.
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I do like the face in the first one. But her foot looks huge to me and the rail also. Maybe just her face with a simple/plain background?
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