Portrait of my father as a young lad

[Peggy Baumgaertner]

Jennifer,

I see three drawing errors. The nose is too far to the (our) right, the mouth is marginally also too far to the (our) right, and the jaw (on our right) is too carved in and shallow. It should follow the same sweeping arc that matches the jaw on the (our) left side. The chin is not wide enough at the bottom on (our) right side. It should also follow the shape of the chin on the (our) left side. Think symmetry when putting a face together.

The rest of the drawing is very well done.

Peggy