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Old 05-01-2005, 03:26 PM   #1
Kimberly Dow Kimberly Dow is offline
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I'm moving in just 2-3 weeks - so my concentration level is low. But, I still have to paint. This is my first attempt at a nude with my own references.

Im curious - I started out with this first one and decided it was boring and changed it. I've had a couple comments in praise of the 2nd version and others in praise of the first.

Do most prefer a softer version? The original didn't have the skin finished, but you get the idea.

It's still in progress, by the way.
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Old 05-01-2005, 04:43 PM   #2
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I like the first version a lot more. Much more delicate and natural.
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Old 05-01-2005, 06:23 PM   #3
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Me too! Beautiful job, Kim.
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Old 05-01-2005, 06:53 PM   #4
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I'm not sure if I understand which one was the first version. So I will say it like this........I really like the top one.

A lot!

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Old 05-01-2005, 09:49 PM   #5
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The top one has my vote also.
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Old 05-01-2005, 10:44 PM   #6
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Thanks for the comments, my esteemed collegues. Unfortunatly, the top one is where it was, now it's the bottome one. But - the good news is I can always paint the top version again. Lesson learned - softer and more natural for the nudes seems to be the preference. I actually liked it the way it was until someone made a comment that it was dull. Then all of a sudden I found it dull as well. It's good to learn lessons.
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Old 05-01-2005, 11:32 PM   #7
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No Kim, it wasn't dull at all. It was warm and inviting, do it again the first way please.

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Old 05-02-2005, 12:49 AM   #8
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Hi Kim,
I like it either way but the lighting doesn
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Old 05-02-2005, 12:49 PM   #9
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I like the first version a lot more. Much more delicate and natural.
So do I.
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Old 05-02-2005, 12:51 PM   #10
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Originally Posted by Kimberly Dow
This is my first attempt at a nude with my own references.
What does that exactly mean?
By the way, a very beautiful job.
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