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Old 02-13-2008, 03:40 PM   #7
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Hi Patty,
I still think that you could crop the motif a bit closer so that the persons become more like individuals in stead of just a group on the beach.

I think that it would be a waiste of time going on with a composition that is off.

Why not wash it all off with white spirit and start over on your canvas in stead of waiting for another to come?

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