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Old 06-14-2007, 05:09 PM   #5
John Bruso John Bruso is offline
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I love these critiques!

The three of you have convinced me to go back and re-work the painting. I agree with the "cone" imagery as well as the color harmony comment. The darker values present only in the baby's eyes are startling, as well! The three of you have nailed all the things about this painting that were bothering me. Usually, my paintings have too many edges and too much detail. This time around, it was the opposite!

I plan to post an updated version as soon as possible. Please check my progress. Also, I would love to hear further critiques from anyone who has more to say

Thank you so much.
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