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Old 08-20-2005, 07:13 PM   #1
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Hi Brenda -

I vote for no. two. I feel that it fits the subject better and doesn' t distract like all the lines in the larger chair do.
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Old 08-20-2005, 07:47 PM   #2
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oh darn.
I just finished putting in the black chair. I think if I make the background dark (her dress is white), it will be all right. Hmm. Maybe I ought to change it.
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Old 08-20-2005, 07:51 PM   #3
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Thank you for your vote, Julie!
I think I will let it dry now and tomorrow darken the background and see how it is. If it's still too overpowering I'll change it. (But there is something about the over-powering that I like.)
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Old 08-20-2005, 07:55 PM   #4
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Sharon Knettle,
This was all drawn freehand.
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Old 08-20-2005, 07:58 PM   #5
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Hi!

Maybe you could chop off part of the chair. You could: A) Omit everything above the arch B) omit A plus omit the verticle lines on that part of the back C) omit all of that and have a straighter, lower back. I have sloppily illustrated C in photoshop, below (hope you don't mind).

I do have a chair like this with a small shape on the back and if you like I can e-mail you a photo of it. Good luck with the painting, I'm sure it will be lovely!
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Old 08-20-2005, 08:01 PM   #6
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Here it is like "A."
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Old 08-20-2005, 08:12 PM   #7
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Hi Lacey,

I like "A". That's what I was thinking about doing, but I am in love with those lines above the arch. Here is where I have to be ruthless I suppose. The chair is rather unusual and I love it for that (it's a cross between a Queen Anne and a Windsor--kind of the Quaker version). But I think that because one doesn't see the whole chair, those spindles above the arch are just odd.
Oh well. I'll have to use this chair in it's entirety in another painting.
I think I will probably end up going with "A". But I'll sleep on it first.
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Old 08-20-2005, 10:25 PM   #8
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Hi Brenda,

Whichever chair you use make sure that her elbow is not floating, but touches the arm of the chair. Hope that helps!
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Thank you, Enzie!
I still have to unify the lights and adjust a few things. And the more I look at the chair I see I need to adjust the arm of it a bit. I will remember to "connect" her arm and the chair arm. Thank you for the heads up!
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I like the first chair, and I'd omit the bars above the arch.
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