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Old 08-09-2005, 11:36 PM   #4
Lon Haverly Lon Haverly is offline
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Very nice flesh tones.

The turquoise blouse does little for the painting, and I would have elected to paint only a bit of the collar, and vignetted the rest, not painting to the edge of the canvass as you have done with the shoulder lines, particularly with the tangent at the right edge of the canvas and the tiny bit of arm showing in the corner.

However, I agree with John. Take what you learned and apply it to the next painting.
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