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Old 05-24-2005, 09:52 PM   #7
Lon Haverly Lon Haverly is offline
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I admire your work. However, the close inspection of the proportions of the face bother me a little. The eyes do not line up well, and the jaw line on the viewer's right looks crimped. It looks like you struggled a bit with this one.

The windows also need to have less intesity, so that there is distance shown. They look like little paintings on the glass rather than trees off in the distance.

Lovely work overall.
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