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03-24-2005, 08:12 PM
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Joined: Jul 2004
Location: Pine Bush, NY
Posts: 22
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Claudemir,
I am curious, did your client object to the changes you made? I think it is a beautiful painting and they should be grateful for the work you did. The hand that hangs over the chair may look a little bit too masculine. I am only thinking in terms of the vanities of women in general and what objection she may have had. I am looking forward to seeing more of your work.
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03-25-2005, 02:18 PM
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Juried Member PT Professional
Joined: May 2004
Location: Americana, Brazil
Posts: 1,042
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Well, I suppose your question should be addressed to Andrey, the painting above is his.
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04-02-2005, 11:55 AM
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Joined: Jan 2003
Location: Presque Isle, Maine
Posts: 48
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Thoughts on your Painting
Hello,
I can't stop myself from chiming in here. I think you have a beautiful painting. In my mind it is only a few steps away from spectacular. I'd love to see you glaze in a slightly deeper shadow and define ever so slightly the line of her neck, cheekbone and receding shoulder . Not so much a line but richness in the shadows. She also has a beautiful shadow on the curving back side of her lips I'd love to see glazed in ever so delicately. To emphasize the fullness and turning of her lips. The shadow that defines the end of her mouth where the top of the lip meets the lower lip would add a little drama to her mouth. It would be just adding a little dot angeling down but I think it would a beautiful addition.
I hope that is of some use to you,
Lara Cannon
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04-02-2005, 12:17 PM
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SOG Member FT Professional '09 Honors, Finalist, PSOA '07 Cert of Excel PSOA '06 Cert of Excel PSOA '06 Semifinalist, Smithsonian OBPC '05 Finalist, PSOA
Joined: Mar 2004
Location: Philadelphia, PA
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Hi Andrey,
Welcome to this Forum! Lara is right that you do have a spectacular and successful painting in the works. It is so much improved over the photograph reference! Your superior drawing skill and sense of proportions are amazing, and it is well worth it for us to study how you process a photograph into a painting. I have learned much from you already. Thanks for posting this!
Garth
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