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Old 05-17-2002, 10:09 PM   #1
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I decided to vignette this. Your comments are valued. Just practice.
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Old 05-17-2002, 10:14 PM   #2
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Old 05-17-2002, 10:15 PM   #3
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Old 05-18-2002, 12:15 AM   #4
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Lon,

I am always amazed with your zest for painting! Wonderful! Particularly enjoy the confident sketchiness of this piece. Keep those fingers a walking, you are definitely on your way!...L
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Old 05-18-2002, 01:52 AM   #5
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Thank you! I enjoyed this one. He is my grandfather.
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Old 05-19-2002, 07:42 AM   #6
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Hi Lon,

I like the painting, do you look like your grandfather? Just wondering. When one paints a face of an ancestor maybe one recognizes something.

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Old 05-19-2002, 01:57 PM   #7
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He is better looking than I! There are certain similarities.

It was a bit hard painting him, which shows up in the somewhat overworked face. I struggled catching the tone of the expression - the slight smile, but slightly sad eyes. He was not a smiling man, though not altogether unhappy.

It is hard painting people I know, as there is too much information in my subconscious, conflicting with what I see.

I wish the face were as sketchy as the background, but, alas, I secumbed to dabbling it to death. But you have to quit somewhere. It is somewhat like my drawing style, loose around the edges.
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Old 05-19-2002, 05:05 PM   #8
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Hey Lon, I like your painting very much. I'm not big on altering what people do but I wonder what you would think of the painting if it were simplified and cropped like this?
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Old 05-19-2002, 09:20 PM   #9
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YES!

Maybe I could resize the canvas. Ha ha! Good lesson.
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