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Old 01-23-2005, 05:27 PM   #3
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Allan,

What a great image.

I would try and push the shelf to our right back a bit. It appears to be too bright, I think if you greyed it down a bit it would receed and give a little more kick to the subject.

Or maybe give a little more highlight to the beard.
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