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Old 12-23-2004, 03:07 PM   #5
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Denise,

I hope you don't mind me taking a digital shot at your lovely painting. I had a little time and I love the puzzle. As Heidi pointed out, it's a treat to see the more mature subjects.

I tried (crudely) to de-emphasize the neck along with taking some of the highlights away from the top of her right eye. I also added a bit of a dark shadow in the corner of her mouth on her right side.
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