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Old 03-02-2004, 11:11 PM   #4
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Chase, I like the background, personally. It says outside, without distracting from the emotion of the drawing.

My criticism is woith the teeth and hands, two elements which, if you choose to draw, require good technique and drawing. The fingers of the lady appear to be too fat. The hand of the man appears to be elongated. The teeth are obscure. Perhaps a bit more edge to the skyline of the teeth would help. All in all, a pleasing drawing.
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