Ashley and Ray

[Chase Mitchell]

I really appreciate your time Steve. You've helped me so much with the last two drawings I have posted. I don't like when I do a drawing for someone and they just say they are happy with it. I feel that I need a critique or something. And that's why I feel privileged to be a part of this community. So Steve, I take all your thoughts into consideration. And thank you once again.

[Lon Haverly]

Chase, I like the background, personally. It says outside, without distracting from the emotion of the drawing.

My criticism is woith the teeth and hands, two elements which, if you choose to draw, require good technique and drawing. The fingers of the lady appear to be too fat. The hand of the man appears to be elongated. The teeth are obscure. Perhaps a bit more edge to the skyline of the teeth would help. All in all, a pleasing drawing.