Compositional critique requested

[Janel Maples]

I hired a model who turned out to be a belly dancer. What fun we had.

Anyway, this photo kept talking to me so I did some experimenting with the Golden Mean (more like trying to figure it out) and came up with this composition.

This is really hard stuff for me. I've been working on it so long that my eyeballs are seeing spirals so now I don't know if I'm doing this right or not.

I'm looking for a confirmation that I did in fact apply this spiral properly or for someone to slap me along side the head and tell me to start over.

Thanks for any help you can give me.

: )