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Old 05-24-2006, 10:33 AM   #2
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It looks as if this is not quite finished. A painting can have a "painterly" look but still be refined a bit more in the details. The eye on our left in particular, as well as other details here and there, could use a bit more finish.

Also, when I looked at this composition my first impression was that the plane was dropping bombs on his head.
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