Thanks, Tricia and Claudemir-
I wish I could go back and make these corrections, but the deed is done. Still, it helps to have feedback in order to do better next time.
Your comments hit on the same things I saw, so I feel good. Even though I didn't fix these in time, at least I can see with my own eyes what the problems are and get confirmation of them by you helpful fellow artists.
This was a rush job - it was for my nephew and his bride. Due to time restrictions, I had literally a day and an evening to take pictures and complete it.
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