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Old 01-25-2005, 03:29 PM   #4
Julie Deane Julie Deane is offline
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Slant of head
Hi Ilaria -

Check out the top left part of his head (our right). To me, it looks like you could flesh this out by adding some width. Looks a little too slanted an angle to me.

About the bannister - maybe if you brought it out farther at the bottom?
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