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Old 03-12-2004, 01:48 AM   #1
Andrea Cranmer Andrea Cranmer is offline
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Three in charcoal




This portrait is approximately 10" x 12", charcoal. I am posting it as finished since it has already been sprayed with a fixative - although I do appreciate any advice I can use in the future. (plus, I might still be able to tweak this one a bit) I have so much to learn...

As for a self-critique, the older boy seems a bit pasty looking, maybe due to over-modeling? There is a line in his shirt I would like to remove. Also, I should have enlarged my daughter's eyes a bit. The picture was taken outside, and I couldn't believe how the kids cooperated! They are, of course, my inspiration.

Thanks for looking.
Andrea
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