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Old 01-29-2009, 02:42 PM   #1
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Old drawing of my mother




This is a large pencil drawing (42" x 24") of my mother I had done a few years ago. It had been put away so long I had forgotten about it, until recently, when I moved to KY.
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Old 01-29-2009, 05:18 PM   #2
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James,
It is a fine drawing, very subtle values, drawing and composition.

I would so like to see close up details, to see the marks from the pencil / charcoal. How did you make it, from life or photo?
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Old 01-29-2009, 06:33 PM   #3
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Thank you Allan

Thank you Allan. I admire your paintings very much. Oil painting is new to me, and frustrating, because I do not yet have sufficient technical control over the medium. I envy those, like yourself, who do.
If I remember correctly, I started the picture from life, using a string grid. The snow was melting pretty quickly, so I took some photos of the background and the subject and finished it in the studio.
I really don't have a problem with working from photos because I have done lots of drawing from life. But I find it very important to make careful value studies from life, especially taking note of the differences in value between the lightest light and the darkest dark of each part of the subject. In this way, I can change to a higher tonal key and still retain the value relationships. The avoidance of photographic distortion, and the careful modulation of edges is also important.
As you can see in the details, I am not overly concerned with being technically clean. I believe the overall effect is what is important.
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Old 01-29-2009, 06:59 PM   #4
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Thanks for the details. The values are so delicate and it is almost as if one can see the colors.
The light is reflecting from the snow and it feels like it is coming from all directions, this is a really tough job.
You are very good, I'll look forward to your next posts.
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Old 01-29-2009, 10:51 PM   #5
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Wow, very very nice, James. Great composition, love the varying planes given by the wall, adding interest and wrapping around the subject. It feels like it could already be a painting: I like that there is just enough detail without overwhelming, and great values/edges. Those leaves behind her really add to the picture.
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Old 02-01-2009, 09:46 PM   #6
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Really nice work.

There are so many beautiful details.
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