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01-11-2006, 08:07 AM
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Juried Member
Joined: Apr 2004
Location: London,UK
Posts: 640
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A small portrait of Anna
Here is a portrait I am almost finished with, but first I would like your opinion!
All of a sudden I realized how androgenous this young girl is. She is twelve, but looks older in real life. I know that this ambiguity is very much a characteristic of that age, but now I just can't help noticing it every time I look at the painting.
Critiques welcome
Ilaria
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01-11-2006, 08:34 AM
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Approved Member
Joined: Nov 2003
Location: Washington, DC
Posts: 105
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I think that it's very impressionistic. Was this painted from life or from a photograph?
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01-11-2006, 10:02 AM
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Juried Member
Joined: Apr 2004
Location: London,UK
Posts: 640
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Judson, that was painted from a photo, to my regret, as I do prefer to paint live but can't always afford to refuse portraits when the sitters are not available !
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01-11-2006, 10:30 AM
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UNVEILINGS MODERATOR Juried Member
Joined: May 2005
Location: Narberth, PA
Posts: 2,485
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Hi Ilaria,
I think this is a beautifully painted portrait head. Your color has a punch that I haven't seen before. (I've always admired your delicacy and luminosity, and this has those qualities, and more.) About the androgenous quality: the important question is, is it really present in the actual girl? If so, you have caught her essence. If not, maybe you have exaggerated certain features. Is this a commission? If so, you could ask for their final feedback before declaring it finished, and see how they react.
Alex
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01-11-2006, 10:54 AM
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Juried Member
Joined: Jul 2001
Location: Phoenix, AZ
Posts: 1,734
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Hi Ilaria, I always love your bold style and palette and this is a wonderfully solid head. I think twelve is a perfect age to be - so much promise and hope in the future. She looks intelligent and level-headed here, I think you should be very proud of this painting!
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01-11-2006, 01:14 PM
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Associate Member
Joined: Sep 2002
Location: Madison, WI
Posts: 1,567
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I couldn't find anything to critique, Ilaria. If her parents are pleased I would stop right here. I love your style.
Jean
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01-11-2006, 08:57 PM
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SOG Member
Joined: Aug 2003
Location: Southboro, MA
Posts: 1,028
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Ilaria, this is lively and lovely... really like your use of color and how you've handled the paint in this one. (She appears young in the painting, I think... though it'd be hard to guess an exact age, which is how kids that age are anyway!) Kudos!
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01-12-2006, 12:57 PM
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CAFE & BUSINESS MODERATOR SOG Member FT Professional
Joined: Jul 2001
Location: Seattle, WA
Posts: 3,460
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Gorgeous, especially the color!
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01-23-2006, 07:49 AM
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Juried Member
Joined: Apr 2004
Location: London,UK
Posts: 640
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A few changes to this painting have brought me an inch nearer to her in likeness. I got used to having this painting, so I started appreciating its being slightly ambiguous.
I have made her neck a little thinner, and her head has aquired a different tilt, I also reworked the shadow area, so to match the amount of build up that was on the light side.
It was quite scary reworking, as usual I started with a few strokes and ended up painting everywhere, but I am happier now
Thanks for looking
Ilaria
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01-23-2006, 09:15 AM
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Juried Member FT Professional
Joined: Jul 2003
Location: Corpus Christi, TX
Posts: 1,713
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This is just so fresh and lovely - has to be my favorite work of yours.
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