Ballerina Dressing

[Bob Bissett]

This is oil on board with a textured ground. Size is 16" x 24". Started about eight years ago just prior to giving up painting during mid-life crisis. Got all my stuff out about two months ago. I'm thinking it is done. Interested in first impressions as well as thoughtful critisism. Attaboys ok, too, if any.

[Bob Bissett]

[Michele Rushworth]

Wonderful!

The only area I think might need some work is the mom's face. I know the reference for that area isn't the best but I think in the painting it could use some more definition of the of the large turning planes of her head. It looks pretty flat right now.

Otherwise, a very expressive piece. I like how you substantially departed from the color in the reference to make a unique piece that stands well on its own.

[Bob Bissett]

Thanks, Michele, for the feedback.

"The only area I think might need some work is the mom's face. I know the reference for that area isn't the best but I think in the painting it could use some more definition of the of the large turning planes of her head. It looks pretty flat right now. "

I'll change that. Your echoing others here. I didn't want it to be a double portrait. Was hoping I could get away with the face in shadow. Must model that face a little more. A bigger version can be seen at www.buildart.com.

[Linda Brandon]

Bob, I really like this painting. The warm, limited palette and the mysterious mother mesh nicely with the unfinished background decisions.

It reminds me of early allegories of youth and old age. I admire the "I'm young and cute and you're not!" attitude of this little girl. No wonder it was a precursor to a mid-life crisis! The best way to get through them is to paint your way through them. Please keep posting your work.

[Janel Maples]

Bob,

I really like this too. I am not qualified to critique but I wanted to share my thoughts with you.