Advice please.

Carolyn Bannister · 03-27-2005, 10:06 AM

I went to a local Breton festival yesterday and managed to get a couple of photos of this very interesting man in traditional costume. I would like to paint him if i can but i have never really thought about composition and whether a photo is a good resource or not.

I have posted the originals and a couple of cropped versions, one of the problems I can see is his left arm and what to do with it. I am not used to altering an image to make a good composition, i usually just draw what i see in front of me!

Do you think they are usable? Any advice please.

Mike McCarty · 03-27-2005, 11:26 AM

Happy Easter Carolyn, and thanks for the early morning puzzle.

If I were given the above photos I would select the following. I would first resolve the left arm issue by dropping it by his side. I would then set out to eliminate the background distractions and attempt to bring him forward.

I think it could be nice to have some of the distant buildings and other compositional elements worked into the background, but it would take much more thought and manipulation from what you have here.

If you utilized a 24x18 canvas you would have a head size of approx. 5.6 inches (I don't know what that is in Europa measurements). You might be better served going to a 28-30 inch canvas.

The second is just a simplified cropped version.

Carolyn Bannister · 04-03-2005, 11:40 AM

Mike,

Thank you for the help, I would really like to have a go at this face, I definitely have a thing about interesting (wrinkly

) faces, I think this one fits that category

John Reidy · 04-04-2005, 09:08 PM

Carolyn-

Hi. I thought I'd try something else and see what you think. It's a little rough but I think you can get the idea.

I softened the background and took it more to the blue side to give some distance. I then eliminated a couple of people that seemed to get in the way of a simpler composition. Then I changed the back of the sign to mimic the color of the rose in his lapel. I also exagerrated his right (our left) shoulder to get it to line up with the roof line. Oh yea, I also got rid of the chimney coming out of his head.

His left arm works for me in this set up. What do you think?

Claudemir Bonfim · 04-04-2005, 10:39 PM

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Originally Posted by Mike McCarty

I would first resolve the left arm issue by dropping it by his side. I would then set out to eliminate the background distractions and attempt to bring him forward.

I think Mike is right, I'd suggest a light background, just eliminating the other people.

It's a pitty you haven't taken photos from the other guy on his left arm, it would also give a good portrait.

Carolyn Bannister · 04-05-2005, 06:23 AM

Oops, I can't see it John, all I get is the little red cross

John Reidy · 04-05-2005, 10:53 AM

Carolyn-

I'm sorry, I don't understand. Do you mean my posted image isn't viewable except for a little red cross? If so, does anyone see the posted image as I can?

Curious.

Mike McCarty · 04-05-2005, 10:58 AM

I can't see it either John. You might try uploading it again. I looked at it and it seems to be within the parameters.

Claudemir Bonfim · 04-05-2005, 12:35 PM

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Originally Posted by John Reidy

Carolyn-

I'm sorry, I don't understand. Do you mean my posted image isn't viewable except for a little red cross? If so, does anyone see the posted image as I can?

Curious.

That's it John, I'm using the XP version for Windows and I cannot see your image.

John Reidy · 04-05-2005, 01:50 PM

Most interesting.

I have two computers, both macs, one is a G4 Powerbook with Safari for internet use. This is the program and computer I used to post the image which appears fine.

When I received your message and Mike's I checked on my G3 desktop using Internet Explorer and the posted image is not there.

I will try emailing the image to myself on the G3 and see if I can post it there. I'll let you know if it works.

If it doesn't is it permissable to email the jpg to you Carolyn?