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Old 03-06-2003, 12:27 PM   #1
Sergio Ostroverhy Sergio Ostroverhy is offline
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24" x 20", pastel portrait




Measures: (24" x 20")
Technique: pastel/paper
Title: Legionnary
Source: after model
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Old 03-06-2003, 02:14 PM   #2
Sophie Ploeg Sophie Ploeg is offline
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Lovely, really nice. He does look a bit stern.
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Old 03-07-2003, 12:05 AM   #3
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Sergio, the soul of this firefighter comes through in this portrait!

I really don't consider myself right to critique your work. Yes, there is a "but" coming...

I am not sure there is anything you can do about it because of the decoration on the uniform. But the two massive orange fringe shoulders are so distracting from the wonderful features of the face. I don't know if it is because they are so saturated compared to all but his skin tones, or the background is very plain.

Hopefully an SOG pro can jump in here and find me wrong or give some suggestions.

If the portrait is from a photo reference, can you post it? How about a close-up of that wonderful face?

Welcome to the Forum. I like your work!
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Old 03-07-2003, 03:22 AM   #4
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Actually, there was no photo done for that work. I drew it from a life model.
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Old 03-16-2003, 12:45 PM   #5
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Old 03-16-2003, 01:13 PM   #6
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HI

Salut Sergio,

My comment about this piece, and in your work in general, is that I get the impression there is a strong influence of retro eastern communist art.

When I look at the subjects and try to "know" them, say that in most of your pieces they convey to me more strength and loyalty, and someone who is an exemplary citizen, but they reveal absolutely no individuality or vulnerability, and so in that sense they remind me of political art and less portraiture.

I've visited to your website, I think your exacting style is great and beautiful to look at. As far as the portraits, if you want to convey the sort of impression that I described, that's certainly valid. I'm just mentioning it as this is a portraiture website and if you are searching to do "true" portraitures, I think more of the person's personality needs to find its way to the viewer.

I hope that explanation makes sense.

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Old 03-17-2003, 06:04 PM   #7
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I shall think about your comment first, then will try to answer.
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Old 03-19-2003, 08:41 PM   #8
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Hello Sergio,

I visited your site. It is apparent from these portraits that your technical ability is great. Your oil portraits as well as your pastels are delicately rendered with beautiful flesh tones.

What bothers me, though, is that they are all so stern looking, not a smile or a hint of one in the whole bunch. This is not to say that all portrait subjects need be smiling, but maybe one or two?

I especially like your portrait of Sharon in pastel. It is beautifully done and the play of light on her face is exquisite. Although I can appreciate this portrait as an artist and the talent it took to make it, it rather leaves me with a cold feeling. Forgive me, if I do not understand where you are coming from or what you are trying to say, but I would be interested in knowing. Your work is exceptional and I would love to see something you have done in a lighter vein.
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Old 03-20-2003, 10:24 AM   #9
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Hello Alicia,

I did things 15 years ago which were more dynamic. Influanced by Soutine.

I do not consider art as something which must please you or make you feel comfortable in your beliefs. The essence of my painting (which I try to say in my latest work: www.fireface.com) is to reveal a feeling of mystery and religious revelation.

My portraits are technical exercises as concerning their essence. I do not really feel obliged to put any positive feelings or smiley ambiance.

I would say that a portrait for me must at the end give the same shock as the view of Mount Everest at sunset.

Regarding the portrait of a Legionary, in particular, I must add two things:

1. It was the first pastel portrait in my life.

2. It is the portrait of a completely amazing person, the portrait of a friend, of somebody whose life is a real novel... His expression is really like that.

I understand, though what you mean. I think soon I will try to do the portrait of my son and my wife and may be some other feelings will come through.

The point is not WHAT you represent but that what you represent fits exactly in what you WANTED to pass to your viewer as an emotion.

Here is the portrait of Sharon (which You discussed earlier). It is a detail... and represents my second pastel portrait I did after the military guy... As you see the technic of graduation of the tons are more subtile.
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Old 03-20-2003, 11:57 AM   #10
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Sergio, I like your paintings. I think you do feel your subject
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