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Old 10-24-2006, 11:55 AM   #1
Marina Dieul Marina Dieul is offline
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Hi,
this is a 24" X 36" oil.
It's not finished yet, I want to work more on the sky, and a bit on the fabric, but the shapes and values are here.
I want to finish it this week, so if you have something to to tell me, it's time.
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Old 10-24-2006, 12:00 PM   #2
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The contrasts look too hard on my screen. The painting is more subtle in the dark parts.
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Old 10-24-2006, 07:14 PM   #3
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I think this one looks better.
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Old 10-24-2006, 08:44 PM   #4
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Marina,

Right now I am in awe. This is no cute baby portrait, even though the baby is adorable. This is a figurative piece that says something much more, I'm not sure what, but does the viewer have to be sure WHAT a work of art says, exactly? I would venture to say you are getting ready to move figurative art in a new direction.
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Old 10-25-2006, 04:23 AM   #5
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The baby is really cute and normally I hate cute baby pictures but........

the most impelling component for me is the impending doom in the clouds, its beautiful and hard hitting.

Just my take on it though
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Old 10-25-2006, 07:57 AM   #6
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Marina, wow! I love this painting! Your choice of placement for the baby is terrific. (When I saw the title of the thread I expected a wing-sporting baby.)

Really nice treatment of light, the satin is beautiful, the clouds convincing.

Your flesh tones are very nice. There's one thing, though - I would take a look at the baby's chin area. Just below and to the side of his mouth, the color is very warm and saturated. I think if you grey that area down just a tad, you'll see more convincing flesh tones.
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Old 10-25-2006, 09:47 AM   #7
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Thanks Alex !
I knew you were going to say something interresting ang intelligent!
I had this piece in mind for a long time ( years!), but I had to wait because I wanted to control everything, and I didn't have all the skills to do it. I needed 5 photo sessions to obtain the pose, and the light I wanted, struggled with composition and colors, repainted the clouds several times...
Well, all the technical things were difficult but under control. The only thing I have no doubt is the concept. As you said it's not a cute baby portrait, even not really a portrait.
It's difficult for me to explain in french, so in english... I considere that children and babies are interresting beings with a rich interior life. I have a hundred more ideas in this direction...I would like to paint faster!

Hi Carolyn,
I laughed when I read that you hate cute baby pictures! I like cute baby picture, as long as they are photos in the family album!
In the beginning, there was some blue sky between the clouds, but finally I changed that.
Looks like an irish sky, now, isn't it?

Hi Cindy,
I wanted to keep things very simple, and didn't want to have superfuous elements like for exemple wings... I though that I could say what I wanted with those 3 elements: sky, baby and fabric...There was already so much possibilities...
Thanks for your comment, and you're right for the chin, I will correct that.
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Old 10-29-2006, 09:16 PM   #8
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Marina, I love the skin tones. Nicely done! I have a baby commission coming up and am scared as hell, since I have never painted a baby before. I have a feeling I will be looking at your baby more often!
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Old 10-29-2006, 09:39 PM   #9
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Marina,
this is some baby !
I am not sure about the clouds, I feel that they are a bit massive. I would make them more diffuse, airy so that the contrast to the silky blue becomes higher.
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Old 10-31-2006, 04:15 AM   #10
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This is really interesting as a figurative piece! The size of the baby compared to the rest makes it fascinating. I love the darker clouds. I love the hands and expression. Like Alex, I dont know what it is saying - but it matters not since everyone will read something into it. The only thing I am just the slightest hesitant about is the fabric. It is painted well, but just reminds me of something you would see in a portrait photography studio. Regardless - great job!
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